Explanation writing

For literacy we had to write an explanation because we have to do an E-assttle in week 3. I wrote about why it’s important to spend time outside. The learning intentions are I made a quick plan, I proofread and fixed my writing, I wrote my work in a set amount of time. I think I could make the introduction better.  The question was a good idea but I need to think about my follow up sentence.   

Why Is It So Important To Spend Time Outside?

Do you ever wonder why people tell you to go outside?  It’s because when you go outside you  get healthy, get Vitamin D and to meet other people. 

Firstly. The sun is good for you because it gives you vitamin D. Vitamin D is good for you because it helps process the calcium through the body. Calcium helps make the bones in the body stronger.

Secondly, it keeps you fit because when you’re outside you want to explore so you walk to places you want to see because there are a lot of cool things outside but make sure you wear sunscreen so you won’t get sunburnt.

Lastly also when you’re outside it  keeps you off a screen and if you are on a screen it can make your eyesight  bad. If you’re on a screen all day that’s why you should go outside. It’s just as fun as a screen and you can meet up with your friends or meet new people.

In conclusion you need to be outside because it’s really good for you and you meet new people  and most importantly it’s fun to go outside. So get out there and go to the beach or the forest.

How to play football

 For literacy we had to write a explanation because we have to do a E-aslte  test soon so we did a practise and I did mine about how to play football                                                                                                                                                                         Do you know how to play football? Well if you dont here is how to play. To get a goal you need to dribble the ball to the other side. and try to kick the ball into the goal without the goalie getting the ball. And if someone from the other team is trying to get a goal you have to get  the ball off of them.

 

What you need for football is two teams with 9 players on each team. There’s two goals and you score at the opposite goal. There is one ball that you try to get off the opposite team. You also need football socks, shin pads and a pair of football boots. 

 

The rules for football are you can only kick the ball. If you touch the ball with your hands it would be a handball and your team will get a penalty. The only time you can touch the ball is when it’s a throw in. Another rule is offside, offside is when you get passed the ball and you’re in front of the other team and you will get a penalty. But when you have the ball and you pass the other team and you don’t pass the ball it won’t be offside and you won’t get a penalty. And there’s fouls, fowls is when you trip someone up or hurt someone it won’t always be on purpose, also if you do a hand ball you will get a foul and the ball gets passed to the other team when the ref says it’s a foul.

 

In conclusion, football is really fun because you’re playing with your friends and having a go at scoring goals. If you’re really good at football you might be able to win the world cup, football is played all over the world. All you need is a sunny day, a ball and a pair of boots. Are you going to give football a try?