For literacy we had to write an explanation because we have to do an E-assttle in week 3. I wrote about why it’s important to spend time outside. The learning intentions are I made a quick plan, I proofread and fixed my writing, I wrote my work in a set amount of time. I think I could make the introduction better. The question was a good idea but I need to think about my follow up sentence.
Why Is It So Important To Spend Time Outside?
Do you ever wonder why people tell you to go outside? It’s because when you go outside you get healthy, get Vitamin D and to meet other people.
Firstly. The sun is good for you because it gives you vitamin D. Vitamin D is good for you because it helps process the calcium through the body. Calcium helps make the bones in the body stronger.
Secondly, it keeps you fit because when you’re outside you want to explore so you walk to places you want to see because there are a lot of cool things outside but make sure you wear sunscreen so you won’t get sunburnt.
Lastly also when you’re outside it keeps you off a screen and if you are on a screen it can make your eyesight bad. If you’re on a screen all day that’s why you should go outside. It’s just as fun as a screen and you can meet up with your friends or meet new people.
In conclusion you need to be outside because it’s really good for you and you meet new people and most importantly it’s fun to go outside. So get out there and go to the beach or the forest.
